Final Version of Contents Page

I also recieved feedback for my contents page, so I have added "Erica Sweet." to the contents page, took some of the red out and put "Yes please!" on the left hand side.

 

 

Final Version of Double Page Spread

Here you can see that I have changed the font of my double page masthead and added a "bubble" this is to make it appeal to my audience more but to also break up the colours a little.

Final Version of Front Cover

Here you can see i have made the sid positions of the coverlines as equal as possible, without overlapping the rectangles behind the text over other text. I have also changed the colours back to the original black/white on the coverlines but the main coverline is white/black so the audience can tell the difference.

Magazine Update 7-01-15- Double Page Spread

Here is an updated version of my Double Page spread after acting on feedback:
 - Changed the font in the masthead
 - Changed the font of the article
 - Deleted various lines

Magazine Update 7/01/2015 - Front Cover

After the holidays, my teacher gave me feedback based on my magazine. I have made changes to the original drafts of the Front Cover.